Talking to Luke

In today's lesson we had another catch-up session with the creative director, Luke. We told him about our new concept, including the narrative and second set, and updated him on the bird cage building progress. He was happy to see our progress but also gave us a few vital points of critique that need further development:

• He said that it is ok for us to have a second set. 
• That the shots of the male throwing over the table in slow motion , won't look as good as we imagine them to. Therefore we should consider objects falling to the floor or spilling. 
• He said that a 'boring office' is super stereotypical and not very visually exciting, so we should think outside the box of other more interesting boring jobs. 

We will now need to think about these points and develop our idea further.