After our chat with Mike we decided to slightly change our Idea to make it more realistic. We did this by adding in
another character. We created a young 25-30 year old, well build and healthy character, who is his fathers
companion in crime. Adding in this character resolves the issued of the elderly man being physically unfit and therefore easily overpowered by his victim.
We planned to stick to the beginning of the sequence however once the one line of dialogue comes in, that the elderly man says to his wife: "I'm going to bed honey."we would change this into: "I will check what Joe is up to. Good Night."
Once the man then walks into the basement, the audience is introduced to the character of the
son. He will be standing bend over the victim screaming at him. It seems as if he just finished one of the torturing sessions.
The older man walks up to a small fridge and takes out two beer bottles and hands one to his son.
They cheers to their 'success'.
This character could look something like this:
